Sure! I’m no writer so please excuse any mistakes, and these suggestions should be taken lightly, if they seem wrong or would be worse you’re probably more correct.
For “fearless upgrades” the mention of libostree should go to the end of the paragraph just to put less emphasis on the technical side, and I wonder if it would be better to contextualize it as “A/B updates” (like how android calls them), not sure if more people would be familiar with that or not.
In “run your favorite containers” I love the beginning bold passage and that should remain untouched, the area mentioning distrobox and ptyxis I feel should be rewritten to abstract away from them, while linux users love to know that it’s using distrobox and instantly understand it, most people don’t know how it works or what it is along with the ptyxis terminal. I would suggest the wording be adjusted loosely not to mention distrobox at the start, call them containers that can run any distro-specific packages (.deb/.rpm/aur), along with many CLI tools, ending with mentioning the actual software that does it like “Thanks to Distrobox, ptyxis-Terminal, and Brew”. The flatpak and flathub section is great but might need minor adjustment due to changing how brew is mentioned previously!
Steam gaming mode and Waydroid are explained really well but KDE and GNOME might benefit from mentioning briefly they way they differ visually and daily use, like how other multi-DE distros like manjaro differentiates them, something to inform new users on their differences (GNOME is already worded better than KDE on the site for this), and dropping the “built from (fedora atomic name)” to the end just to again make it less prominent for the people that don’t know what that is.
“Hardware Enablement” is a little clunky as a sentence, if the previous bubble’s title could be renamed to “GPU Support” and this part is called something like “Additional Drivers” I think would be more correct and understandable.
Lastly a minor nitpick that “build your own” should go under the download section and start with “Or […]”, just on the off-chance that people scrolling think they have to do that instead of the pre-built images.
Thank you for your time and I hope this feedback helps the site improve!
Edit: (minor grammar changes) and maybe flatpaks and flathub should be highlighted first and foremost in the software section since it should be prioritized due to it being easier for the user, less space than a distrobox container, more convenient and better supported, etc. This is how it’s shown in the documentation for software management already so I feel like this being reflected on the site (which most people are going to read) would help new users, so instead of the “additionally” highlighting flatpak and flathub, the entire first section should highlight it and “additionally any other packages[…]” and that becomes about distrobox and the rest